I actually really like the idea of this poem.
I feel it's more something that's supposed to be heard, not read. Like slam poetry-you should look into that.
I like the concept behind this line:
'ry to find my heart and when/if you do, tell me, I don't thik I can live without it much longer.'
and the idea of friends sitting in the hole to try and make it better is interesting to.
Great self-reflective poem.