That was good. It really makes you think. 5/5.

"They say our heads our in the clouds"
`your second 'our' should read are.
I really liked this line though, you brought your own uniquness into it.. I liked it!

"But to us, it's so much different"
`I know 'so' is used so that you show emphasis, but I dont know if you really need it..

"Looking up through the trees
As light filters down
Not a care for the future
And not a worry to be found"
`Loved the scene here, perfectly written, the sun shining down through the trees is so tranquil and uplifting, and 'not a care for the future, not a worry to be found' ties in so well with this image here - well done

"We play in mowing fields
Dandelions all around
Each one a separate wish"
`Dandelions resembling wishes - perfect!

"And as you run back through woods"
`Eliminate 'and' at hte beginning, you dont need it (:

"Come back to reality
Pull your head from the clouds
Watch the day receding to memory
As worries begin to be found"
`Your ending is quite strong, I really like it, the day passes and it ends up a memory and we're back to reality again.

Great write..
Really thought you did a great job with this

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5/5.
Temps