Comments : For Never Was.. (English Triolet) Revised

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Wow Darcy.. I do not believe words can explain how excellent this write was...honestly this was very impressive. Great form and it was wrote perfectly. It all flowed so nicely together, each line melted into the next..

    5/5

    Temps.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Wonderful use of the Triolet form. Sounds alot like Romeo and Juliet. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Oh Michael, you always know how to surprise me with your beautiful, beautiful work:)

    I am not sure how Kiko inspired you, but he did a hell of a job, lol!

    I loved it, I loved it so:))

    ((hugs)) xx

    5/5 Ingrid