Olwin, you too did a good job with the form. As I read it, I could see the night sky with the twinkling stars. Well done.

Olwin
you did a wonderful job on this form for the club challenge :)
Great piece!
Take Care
Cindy

Stars fill
The night sky
So still

I gaze
As they sparkle
Amaze - This is a forced rhyme.

It seems
So enchanting
Unreal

It would be helpful to add a description of the form at the end so those who are not familiar with the form can see what rules you were adhering to.

Its so beautiful Olwin. Such simple poem but rarely people write abt the beauty of night. Superb indeed.

all the best and take care

Beautiful write...
lovely imagery ...
loved the night sky that you have painted with your words...

Very nicely written. I love to look up at the stars too. :-)

Aww... this is a really short but wonderful poem. I like it!