This was a great poem, inspirational even. This is a great poem to try and lift others up, portraying how we feel easily and then with it's own contradictive twist at the end. Each verse was it's own, and yet connected to the poem as a whole. Very well written. 5/5

This is truely amazing, it gives one a sense of direction and a feeling of hope that with time, our hurt will fade away and we will blossom into this beautiful flower. I liked the way you wrote this, brilliantly amazing.