Oh my goshh. Reading this piece felt like reading my life. This is like a mixture of how my boyfriend and I are feeling, and kind of what we're going through. Like, I don't know how to explain it, but I can relate really well. And this really hits me in the heartt. (: Powerful and captivating write. 5/5.

Your title could definatly be shortened quite a bit cause with such a long title you could possibly be giving away the whole message of the poem, and you dont really want that.. do you?

Anyways, this poem overall was okay. I thought the emotions definatly came out clearly and the reader could tell where you were coming from. I didnt necessarily like how there was a lot of repetition with the beginning of some lines, but other than that, this poem is set aside from many poems, cause it in a way sounds like a rap or a song almost.. not sure.. but something is unique about it.

Good job -

Temps. [Beyond a Poets Mind]

I like your title. It reminds me of a Panic At The Disco song title. Very clever. I love the way this is written it's like a letter almost. Saying goodbye at the end was the perfect way to end this. You have such an amazing talent. Keep it up. Nik