This is such a good poem. Everything is so well done. The flow and diction work together perfectly to create a beautiful poem. Nice work hun. Shanik

This is so powerful.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Hopeing it's just a poem though m'love.
Please keep writting, you have a beautiful talent. x

Intense! i loved the ending, last stanza was by far the best one. very nice realisation.
the last line of the 1st stanza seems a little long, so maybe shorten it. but all in all i thought it was a fab poem, very nicely done.

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