Comments : Sirens

  • 14 years ago

    by Colby

    Wow. This is a great poem. I was not sure if I would get any really great poems to comment on, but the outcome has been terrific. This poem captures your feelings perfectly, and it is honestly one of the best flowing poems I've ever read. Had a little rap to it almost. I really, really liked this one, added to my favs even :). Great job.

  • 14 years ago

    by No Need For A Name

    The timing, rythme and ryme are all over the place, never settling down, causing it to be difficult and incoherent. The wording and subject matter are alright, but never really leave any impression at all. Sorry

    Peace and prosperity,

    (RKD)