Very good right, as the poets above stated, It's a mystery how no one has noticed this, the flow was great, the style was unique, the imagery was suberb. Second stanza though, you forgot to end the quotation, starts int he begining and never ends. Anywho, the reason why this was probably never found, is hardly anyone reads the nature section, it's sad, but true.

Good luck with your endeavors, and best of luck in the contest.