Do you find yourself lying
Repeating "don't worry, I'm fine?"

That's so true, a lot of people say that. I think that this poem is really one of the few poems that I can relate with on a personal basis.

Your ending could have been better, I feel that it's something that could be worked on and almost improved. I like a "bam" ending like something that really drives the point home.

It's a very well done piece. you should be proud that this came out of such a bad situation.

Oh dear, from what you have wrote i think he does not care, but he is a chicken, an emotional misfit who isnot worth your love. I felt the emotion and the flow was great. Great poem.