It flows good , but I think it could be a lot better if you added to it , or maybe use more descriptive vocab? but if not it's fine the way it is, keep it up!

Good poem I'm still confused on the metaphor here(I think it's religious not sure though)

I like the poem but felt that the second stanza fourth line really messed with the flow.

Last stanza third line save and us should be reversed.

Not really sure why I like this poem that much I believe it's because of the flow and the hidden metaphor I really liked it wonderful job.

5/5

Very Good.