That's nice write. I liked the lines and your style of depiction. Well written!

The moment her smile,
fell upon my heart
All the other paths around,
were drifted astray.
these words painted a picure in my head i know feeling amazing work. plz keep them comming

Andyyy I loved your ending sweetie :)
Very well done!

Wow, how could I have miss this beautifully written poem? I love how you use the months as guidelines unfolding the events to the readers.

Darkness would grasp time,
allowing our dreams to collide
^^^ I totally adore how you express this.Magnificent

I must say that is a well crafted poem, your words are like a brush painting a beautiful picture of the events.

Excellent work

Wow, I really really really loved this write! It's amazingly well put and it carries the emotions across so fluidly I think you have outshined in this piece. You deserve a 5/5! XD