Comments : Ugly world

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Countryman fighting each other
    all over the world
    colour racial and cultural
    this my country and your colour in wrong
    your tongue, is speak difference
    your preaching is wrong and bad
    and you must change your thought
    and mind must be with us
    fights with us and kills your own colour
    mind can be poisoned but colour cannot be change.

    *This was my favorite stanza. It has such a complex feel about it. I love how you wrote this. The rhetorical questions are my favorite. I love the diction, very intelligent and the style is very effective for what you're trying to say. Very nice work Nik*