I love how you always include the moon, the night, the sky and the stars in your poems :)
Though the ending didn't say much to me..I loved your descriptions and the metaphors.

Well done Meli :]
Write on~

Awake,
were you
when moons frayed
from sky.
Darkness was deliverance
so you sung to me
that night..

as stars exploded.
^^^
Loved this part Mel !

Your word usage was very eye catching and I learned a new word ... wooooot ....

Wonderfully penned and l loved the read.
- brilliant -