First off, thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem. :)

I lay at night paralyzed in my bed
I almost choke on the words that I never said

This line hits me pretty hard, especially considering I could think of a million things I would like to have said to someone special I lost. I really enjoyed reading this! Keep it up!
Hopeless Romantic

Very well written.....at first i'd decided to mention my fav stanza....but i cant pick one...i like the poem over all....took me in ...

keep writing ^^,

peace~

Powerful. lol. what else can be said? good job. =]

Thank you for commenting my poems :)

I love this poem. You did a very great job

Keep up the good work and take care!

I loved this poem. I could relate a lot and the imagery was excellent. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Great work.

Extremely relatable and well written. i really enjoyed. one thing id consider for future poetry is don't force yourself to rhyme. if you make yourself stick with a pattern or a rhyme it can hold you back from really expressing exactly what your trying to say. for me it creates limitations and thats not what i'd ever want in poetry. sometimes though rhyme does come across very natural and happens without effort. i suspect thats what happened when you wrote this poem. I enjoyed it very much. great job!