Comments : Heart of the ocean (within your eyes)

  • 14 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    I liked this poem. I really liked your choice to include other languages.

    Now your just a distant memory
    In a highly troubled past

    is couplet that really hit home and I enjoyed it. I felt that it was something that really stuck with you.

    The poem at points was sort of wishy washy, meaning it was happy, then sad, then happy, then sad in like two sentences.

    I'm really liking this poem and feel it's a meaning that you should be the one who understands.

    I must ask what does. "Le coeur de l'ocean" the blank of ocean, is it eyes?