I really loved this poem! Shows alot of emotion and i love the meaning behind it!! Great great work!!! 5/5!

Aww...sweety this was such a heartfelt poem. I love how personal this was. If I were you dad I'dbe crying like a big baby. I love how you aren't screaming at him and making him feel guilty...you're just plainly saying he dad will you be here. I think this is your best poem. I loved reading it. Keep it up hun :) Nik

Interesting piece. I think that this one speaks to a lot of people because it's becoming more and more common. How a father could abandon his child I'm not sure.

I really felt that this was more of a short memior then a poem though, the structure made me feel as though you were writing an actual letter(perhaps you did) and then just put up on here.

I liked the poem and the message but felt that it could have benefited from having a different structure and style applied to it.

This is one of those poems that really grabs the reader and tugs at their heart as they read because of how much you can hear the author writing this and the emotion in their words and how they truly feel.

I really enjoyed this piece, and it takes a lot to write something so personal and close to your heart.. but I really thought you did a great job at this, the end result came out nicely.

I must comment on the ending, it was perfect.. a simple 'Will you be there?'

Well done Krista

Great write, it is very emotional and grabs the reader. Well thought out write, with a great flow and good structure. Keep up the fantastic work.

Peace, Joe