Aw. I love, love, love this poem. I especially like this part: "You held me close,
though frightened and scared.
Made me believe,
you had always cared." Awesome poem. 5/5

I love the poem!!! It is yet another great poem from you! You have amazing talent and always seem to amaze me!! 5/5!

The rain would poor.
The sun would fall.
My heart grew fonder.
I didn't care at all.
^^ I don't really understand how the first 2 lines connected with the whole poem.

The sun kept peeking,
like a four year-old child.
My fascination with you,
was never mild.
^^ Again, I don't understand the first 2 lines. But I like the last 2. Though, I think the rhyming was a little forced. Kind of like you just chose the word "mild" because it rhymed. But it DID fit.

You held me close,
though frightened and scared.
Made me believe,
you had always cared.
^^ I really like the last 2 lines. It's building anger and sadness.

Now not the case,
we have moved apart.
Out of ones love;
out of ones heart.
^^ Wow, that's a great ending. At firstit was alittle rough, but this is excellent. I love the last 2 lines. It's great emotion. And I like the rhyme scheme in this stanza.

Good job.

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Wow!!
i really liked this poem:)
it flows really well and it makes me feel like
if was there....
i rlly liked this part:

Now not the case,
we have moved apart.
Out of ones love;
out of ones heart.

loved it!! :D