This poem is very good =]
Your rhyming works well and the flow in all three stanzas is carried through with consistancy. A short yet very nice and descriptive poem

And thank you to the downraters. you should grow some balls and not be such a jealous retard. :)

^^I HATE when people do that. In this case, I really hate it because this was an amazing write. I think you did a wonderful job with the format and rhyme scheme. Honestly, I wouldn't change one thing. As reading, I felt the emotion that you put into. Also, your choice of vocabulary was perfect.

Overall, beautifull read.
5/5 <--- deserves nothing less.

--KJ