I really like this poem its very beautifull =] Your rhyming was really good and the flow works well. Nice job.
Oh and the structure is also very fitting to the style of the poem I dont think iv'e seen one quite like it untill now so excellent job.

I love this poem, very inspirational. Sometimes we'd to find the faith to never say never. When we lost faith in ourself, all we have to remember are these words. Surely it will plays on our mood. Great job, 5/5, kel.

Wow this is really good =]
very true and very well written.... Keep it up!!!! 5/5