A lil confusing hunny
and one small mistake your last word is hear not here =]
keep writing!

Thet might say its a little confusing but y'know what I think? Its like picasso, a poem version, I like the fact that you wrote a poem for people to think about, like, its their crossword puzzle or something, all in all, Its great.

Keep it rockin'
blessed be.

Thankyou,i like to write poems that i understand, and if others dont...well then let there be a bit of mystery lol..

Mystery, thats the right word, anyways, if you got some free time you can check out some of mine, feel free to tell me what you think :)