Comments : A Haunting Past

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    MaryAnne,

    I have some strong thoughts on this matter too. I believe a soul choses his parents in an active way long before birth and is an active force in bringing those two souls together to suit his needs. I think the essence of the soul and the genes passed on in the body it is yet to occupy creates a surrounding in which the soul can grow spiritually.

    One can only imagine the hurt it must feel when the people it has chosen refuse to have him/ her.....

    Good work on the poem, if it reaches just one pregnant woman and makes her think, it will have been worth it, don't you think?

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "Innocent victims faced with,
    A fate they don't deserve.
    Brought into this life,
    Only to be rejected."
    `This was such a true statement, from the start the reader can infer what youre talking about - abortion. These babies that are rejected are indeed innocent victims with a fate they dont deserve.

    "Guilt sweeps over women,
    Who agreed to the choice.
    It can't be taken back,
    The past is remembered"
    `Of course the choice to have an abortion causes women to be full of guilt, wishing they didnt make the choice they did; they know they cant take it back and the past and their choice will never be forgotten.

    Sad write definatly.
    You write very strongly on this topic as always.

    5/5.
    Temps. [Beyond a Poets Mind]