Beautiful, love the emotion you put in this. :)

I'm not sure what to say about this one. It blew me away. I could feel the anger and sadness in this piece so well. I also love how you used the all caps words to put emphasis on how you were feeling. I think that really makes your poem stand out more. I love how honest and pure your feelings were. I think those emotions make the best poems. Really great job hun. I'm enjoying your work alot. Nik