Comments : Summer's Last Dusk

  • 14 years ago

    by Joyce Duboise

    I could truely feel your pain in this poem. I added this to my favorites because I can really relate. Isnt it strange how when you are sad everything sort of moves in slow motion and you watch more. You pay attention to detail more. I love the part that said "painfully blue eyes" beautiful! Just absolutely beautiful!

  • 14 years ago

    by SADADDY

    The reader can sense the pain and sadness in these words you have expressed in this beautiful write. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. May peace and joy fill your heart each and every day.

    Sadaddy