Comments : Soar

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Humming to yourself
    Smelling boundless possibilities to come
    Feeling weightless
    Defying gravity itself

    *I really liked this stanza. For some reason he just jumped out at me. I love the words you use here and throughout the entire poem. I feel such peace and hope when I read this. The imagery is so beautiful. I don't normally read poems like this, but I'm glad I did. Nice work hun. Nik*