Comments : Little Birdie..

  • 14 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is a great poem...
    i am real glad to of read it :)
    although it is really sad...

    there was one spot where i think you made a mistake... because it does not sound quite right...
    "You didnt come,
    To didnt save him,"

    the "To" doesnt sound like it belongs...
    Great job:)

    Keenan

  • 14 years ago

    by KatastropheKay

    This is a great poem hun
    it show's how pet's care about just
    as human's care about one another
    they have affection for another aside from
    their differences weither human or animal.