Great powerful write five out of five, i liked the way you worte this. Keep up the awesome work. I really liked the lines:

"The black asphalt
looks so inviting today.
Like a bed I could sleep in forever.
Or maybe just a few minutes.
Everyone knows
sleep isn't my thing."

*~*bee*~*

Powerfull and heartfelt asphalt *smiles* woo , those were the days

live laugh love be happy

theres only this
theres only us
forget
regret
for life is yours to miss
no other way
no other road
no day but today
no day but today
no day but today

-from rent

peace

jamez x