Hahaha what the hell Joe xD

Lol what Danny said.. exactly. Lots of mixed ideas into one poem? This was quite random.. but then again arent you random as it is?

Joe don't we all go back to the pen, very thought provoking like all of your poems though a bit plagairismic( excuse my spelling)
I think its worth a 5 just for it thought provokingness ha! ha! Ray S

Hahaha... I just wanna say, Joe,
when I read the line "seven, eight, it must be fate"
I just.. couldn't help thinking of when dogs decide
to randomly hump (I hope that isn't too inappropriate to say? XD) their toys/other dogs/someone's leg. That must be what they think, aye. :P