I liked this one alot. I think it was full of raw emotions. I felt so much anger, but also pain. The style is one of my favorites and I think you wrote this poem very well. You weren't afraid to write down you're true feelings. I try not to use slang in my poems, but it was effective here. I can tell you wrote this from the heart and that is what makes it such a good poem. Nice work. Nik

Wow I really liked this it was
well put together flowed wonderfully!!
I really like this and your language helps to
feel what you are/were feeling.