What a unique poem! Wow, well done. I loved your ending, referring to people as vultures.. Youve wrote a short poem but spoken so much truth in those words... I'm truly blown away by this, it was impressively written. You nailed thisss.
5/5. ;]
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I love this. It reminds me of that John Mayer song "Vultures" Anywho I love how simple this is. Good work Ashley. You never fail to amaze me :) Nik

Lovely metaphor and I completely agree. Great work=]