Comments : Your Broken Heart

  • 14 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    This piece had an excellent flow throughout. The rhyme was not overdone, nor did the repetition get old. It was quite enjoyable..and thought provoking.

    Well done, 5/5
    x Paula.

  • 14 years ago

    by xMisSxMassacrEx

    Thank You. =]

  • 14 years ago

    by hehasmyheart

    Omg I love this poem it explains exactly how my guy feels almost made me cry beautifully written comment mine!

  • 13 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    Wow!! This is soooo powerful! I love it! Nice work!