This is a very nice write, thank you for sharin git with us. May peace and joy fill your heart each and every day.

sadaddy

I don't really like the rhyme scheme, but the flow was okay. It was kind of boring, and I didn't really understand it. I guess it's just not for me.

Soda E>

Well the comments sure prove we are all different. I enjoyed the poem, you had great flow and understanding of life for one your age.
Enjoyable Keep up the good write

Well i liked it and think you did a good job expressing your feelings