WOW!! I got into that. it felt like a rap and to dance to. that's outstanding:)

Good job...well-planned
gives new meaning to tongue-in-cheek....

I did this bit, too, when I was much younger..
Strive on...'-)

Very emotional write... little bit passion little anger.. little love ... blended nicely...

Very emotional write... little bit passion little anger.. little love ... blended nicely...