It's all so confusing
and I feel so useless.
I'm sick of this verbal abusing.
Red scars on my arms
While my soul is bruising.
Hurting from the ignorance.
This world is so amusing.

i found this to be my favorite part of the whole read.. very well excuted.. loved it all.. but that one part above i loved the most..

I really like your poem here, it flows well, and has moments that make you think.

My favorite part is:

Although my heart is shaking inside.
From the lust covered bullet
you shot at me last night.
I want so bad for this to all die.

lust covered bullet.... I like that. you should consider writing a poem with that title.

I liked this poem alot. It has alot of emotion and i could feel it. Great job! Keep up the good work

Does bullet cover any lust? What is that?
Okay... I didn't get that very well for creativity.
You see, overall i liked your poem as your writing is far from bad rambling and repetition of same things. So it's really enjoyable. But what I feel that this topic is a very common one, specially in the poetry sites like this. No newness in the subject.
Having said that... it's a nicely written poem with a very good title.

Very well written.....i love the way you always spill out your pain .....totally amazing....i think im going to run out of comments soon ^^,

Overall I liked this poem a lot, though I'm not a fan of rhymes this one seemed to work out well.

"From the lust covered bullet
you shot at me last night"

I especially liked these lines, for some reason they particularly stuck out in my head. Good work here. 5/5

Wow i think this is brilliant! Very different to other poems I've read. I'll definitely be reading more of your work. 5/5

Nice write.