'Why do I feel like this?
My heart is ready to burst,
There's too much pain inside,
And this is not a first.'
`Good beginning, flows nicely, simply written.. 'my heart is ready to burst' was a little cliche but it works.

Sweet poem, how no matter what youre always thinking about this person, and nobody else crosses your mind but them. Simple write but with the repetition you got your point across nicely.

Well done.

Very good poem, and nice flow. It seems very honest and heartfelt and you expressed your emotions very nicely. Good job 5/5

This is a great poem i love the way it sounds great job

This is amazing i love your work!

I enjoy it, has a good flow, 5/5