Comments : Emptiness in My Solidity

  • 14 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Your chioce of wording is beautiful and youv'e written the piece very well, the overall chioce of wording you have used adds more depth to the meaning of the poem =]
    The flow works perfectly and I was captivated from the start, an excellent job most definatly worth a vote 5/5