This is an outstanding expression of a very difficult dilemma ...I love the style that you used, the hesitations gave the reader time to pause and feel the impact of what was being said. A great piece!

Luu :)
Be proud of yourself for writing such a heart-wrenching poem.
Your topic fitted perfectly with the poem, and as I said before, I liked the repetitive lines.
Very well done honey :)
Again, I applaud you for such a good piece.

Write on
~hugs back~

Excellent work as always my Dear Luanne, this was a very difficult piece to write about, but you come out on top every time, great work. Timothy r

Thought provoking and informative. Nice job!

This poem caught my eye because of the title, I never have heard of stone crumbling! Very original idea. Then reading the poem I saw a whole new different meaning then I thought behind the title. This poem was truly original in many ways. I was not expecting a poem on the death penalty, an interesting topic but you executed your thoughts perfectly in this write. Well done.

I wanted to add that I liked the repetition, and the structure with the punctuation gave you a chance to reflect.....The piece was very meaningful!

This is a subject that is endless in pros and cons.

A little girl is brutally murdered and tortured, we scream revenge. Jump throw the hoops of reason and make a decision he should die.

Do we later begin to wonder if it's wrong, does a doubt the size of seed begin to grow?

Heavy decision. But a wonderfully done poem.

I really really like your style i wish i can make one like this..