"Take that long awaited breath
I WANT HOPE AGAIN."

Favorite line. It kinda makes hope seem like breathing and gives the reader a sense of choking and then taking a breath of hope.

Very well written 5/5 =)

Awww:)
this was sooo not a dark poem:)
its rlly sweet n cute:}
i rlly like this part:

Let me be yours,
I'll let you be mine.
Let me have hope again,
Help me learn to shine

love it!!!
hehe
keep on writting:]

AWWW This is so sweet...hope you get it
5/5

Awww....this is really cute! =]
hope you get what it is you want! =]
good job. 5/5