Sourav,
What a lovely poem you have written. It is so nice to see someone be able to open up and discuss their feelings and portray love without sounding like a broken record, very nice write.
Take Care
kay

Kay is right, not the normal love poem. It is well written, your emotions expressed very well. The best present one could receive from their love, your heart.

'My each step follows your path;'
`Try my every step.. sounds a bit better than what you have.

'Your eyes, there lies my fame
Deep in my veins your love flows;'
`This could probly be reworded a bit to sound better.. maybe..
`Your eyes hold my fame,
and deep in my veins your love flows;'

Really well written, you may have had some flow issues but other than that the words were beautiful and nicely spoken.

5/5.

Sourav
what a beautiful poem of love you have penned .

Holds perfection in every moment
Your love is a gift, in it I find art
In my eloquence let me present
With love, my one doting heart.

I loved this stanza...it really touched me so much. The gift of the heart is the best gift you can give. It is giving unconditionaly of yourself. How special that is.
Awesome job!
Take Care
~Hugs~
Cindy

The first poem I have read as I start an adventure through the site. If this is the talent I will run into , I need some tips haha
Good poem done with beauty

In tenderness of your loving flame
I can burn all despicable woes
Your eyes, there lies my fame
Deep in my veins your love flows

^^

Wow Sourav....such passion and tenderness in your words. I love this poem, it has a certain kind of magic in it, the way all girls would like to be loved by an man:)

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

You succeeded once again to hit my heart. I love your poems a lot. Pieces of art, pleases my heart and soul. :)