Comments : If Only

  • 14 years ago

    by Invited

    Good. You want people to inapt with your inner self. Just try and make your meaning clearer to the reader.
    3/5
    Chins
    xx

  • 14 years ago

    by silvertung69

    I like this one. I got a little lost in there but I beleve I hear someone becoming ok with themselves :)