It seems like there is a lot of emotion in this piece.
I really like how the average person can relate to this.
It brings back how I felt when my boyfriend of six months broke up with me.

"Hey, its not like I cry
Over you, because I'm doing fine
And you know that I can't lie
I no longer care that you never tried"
was my favourite part.
Probably because it brought back so many feelings.

Great write~

-Mistress Distress