Wonderful you r right bout the topic wonderful and the poem itself beautiful gud job

Ahh i love this! awesome poem!

Bravo" This was creative and the topic is one that is baffling to most everyone. Intriguing use of words , but over all just a darn good poem
Impressive

Wow, what a unique topic to write about. I thought this was great. I especially loved

"All too tempting to let the ocean of warm colours dance across the skin of your hand.
Prickling and bubbling and destroying the flesh, the closer you get to the cold blue in the middle."

Great imagery in this piece, good job. 5/5