Wow. this poem was amazing. it really was

Innocence is gone,
Stolen by those they trust.
Does he even care?
Maybe he does...
Probably not,
He wants them like him...
To be a failure.

this by far is my favorite stanza. great poem. keep it up :)

Well done using your name as a inspiration to write this poem. I thought you did real well with this, theres nothing I would personally change. Good job.

Corruption...
Mind's decay
A wish for something more,
Yet never to come true.

*Perfect way to start a poem. I loved it. It made me want to keep reading. See you can write Keenan. Silly boy :P Keep it up hun, this was really good. Nik*

Wow, i liked this poem, great use of words and i liked the structure.
(:
great poem

Hmm, interesting poem. I'm not sure if you're talking about yourself or another.

It leaves a lot of mystery which I supose is good because it makes the reader read it again to try and find hidden clues.

I really like the start of the poem.

This would make a good hardcore metal song or basis for one.
dark , well written. Very enjoyable read.

Good poem keenan interesting layout very intense

This is greatly written, has a brilliant message behind and I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up, a tough subject writting on but you definately nailed it.

This is greatly written, has a brilliant message behind and I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up, a tough subject writting on but you definately nailed it.

I like the hopelessness of it and the style keep it comin!