Comments : Corruption

  • 11 years ago

    by just ashley

    Wow. this poem was amazing. it really was

    Innocence is gone,
    Stolen by those they trust.
    Does he even care?
    Maybe he does...
    Probably not,
    He wants them like him...
    To be a failure.

    this by far is my favorite stanza. great poem. keep it up :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Well done using your name as a inspiration to write this poem. I thought you did real well with this, theres nothing I would personally change. Good job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Corruption...
    Mind's decay
    A wish for something more,
    Yet never to come true.

    *Perfect way to start a poem. I loved it. It made me want to keep reading. See you can write Keenan. Silly boy :P Keep it up hun, this was really good. Nik*

  • 11 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Wow, i liked this poem, great use of words and i liked the structure.
    (:
    great poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Hmm, interesting poem. I'm not sure if you're talking about yourself or another.

    It leaves a lot of mystery which I supose is good because it makes the reader read it again to try and find hidden clues.

    I really like the start of the poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    This would make a good hardcore metal song or basis for one.
    dark , well written. Very enjoyable read.

  • 11 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Good poem keenan interesting layout very intense

  • 11 years ago

    by Andrew

    This is greatly written, has a brilliant message behind and I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up, a tough subject writting on but you definately nailed it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Andrew

    This is greatly written, has a brilliant message behind and I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up, a tough subject writting on but you definately nailed it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Rusheena

    I like the hopelessness of it and the style keep it comin!