Comments : Circles

  • 11 years ago

    by ether

    Just say "b_tch" or leave it as it is. I've done that with shtt before and no one cared.

    Nice poem, by the way. It has a nice little flow to it.

  • 11 years ago

    by just ashley

    U can change it to b**ch or witch. I really liked this poem. Kinda reminded me of lion king and the circle of life but in more of a wicked way. Seriously i really loved it. keep up the good work :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    The wallowing screeches,
    The carriers of death,
    The plague of unknown,
    The damnation of souls.

    *Wow...this was my favorite stanza. I love the words you use here and throughout the whole poem. This was really good hun. I'm so glad you're writing again. ^.^ Nik*

  • 11 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    I like the way ashley put it an interesting take on it i liked it very much