Comments : Myself

  • 13 years ago

    by Colin Hamilton

    I can feel the emotion you're trying to present...but it lacks the fluency of speech, it's hard to see through the words. That can be the hardest part. Maybe look up new words other than death and destruction?

  • I've have wished a lot lately to die. Things would be better.

  • 12 years ago

    by ShIsAnA tHe OnE aNd OnLy

    Amazing choice of words. powerful.beautiful.passionate. keep writing you have good potential.5/5