This was amazing. I love the last lines. it sums it up very well. Its dark and exotic at the same time. In stanza 5 i think.. Darkness is capitalized like its a human more then a thing. Makes it more emotional. Good job
You put a unique twist to this one, it was almost creepy in a way.. well duh it was cause it's a dark poem. Okay, I'm telling you something you already know, but no really there was something about this that wasnt like other dark poems and I cant quite figure out what it was but it was brilliant.