I like this poem
it was a good read
if i may suggest maybe putting some punctuation in it
also i was wondering if "Red Rose Garden of Despair" was an actual place...
or a place that is spoken of in a religion
or if you made the place up yourself...
great poem
and thx for the comment

Keenan

This poem is awesome. The way it flows, the wording all of it GREAT JOB!