Comments : I Love You ... <33

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    I like the things you say to me,
    I like how you speak,
    I like your eyes looking at me,
    I hate it when they leak,

    I like how close you pull me,
    I like it that you're glad,
    I like it when you're happy,
    I hate it when you're sad,

    I love the way you smiled that day,
    I love that your heart flew,
    Thats the day you asked her out,
    Just know I'm happy for you.

    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    This is exactly how I felt when my ex ended it with me so he could ask the girl he had fallen for out. Yeah, I was upset but I was also happy that he was happier with her as strange as it may be. Very sweet yet sad. I can relate to this, 5/5. Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Nathan Turner

    I really wasn't expecting much from this poem due to your age, but I was pleasantly surprised :) I liked the repitition on the first two stanzas, also the A,B rhyme scheme that is used works well and the final stanza where you're "happy for you" :) Well written