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by She Loves Me She Loves Me Not
Awwh I can relate to this poem from a past experience. I love the poem, and the format. Really well structured and thought out =]
"I but i must endure
this retched pain...
my bleeding heart...
the silent tears..."
I love this stanza particularly, it's almost as if your writing a list of everything that your body is going through because of this one emotion. But something you can't tell nobody. Love it!!
Keep up the great work 5/5
X x Shaun
Hmmmm, my ex girlfriend cheated on me with my best friend. I loved the form you wrote this poem in because it felt like someone was talking to me. nice work