Comments : The love in my heart

  • 10 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A very sweet poem about love... I loved these lines...

    " But most of all it's what keeps me alive
    knowing I have a purpose
    To give you all the love in my heart"

    Love is a tremenduous feeling, that wants to give... Well done on this one!

    Olwin :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Love does funny things to a person, Nate.
    It can really change you and make you a compassionate and caring partner, when before you were only consumed by your own goals and needs.

    Touching words, I am sure she will love it:)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 10 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    It's short but filled with feelings. Love isn't easy to put in words but you managed very well
    I will be enjoying more of your poems as time goes on.
    Very enjoyable

  • 10 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Awwwwww to say this one ur best poem I have read
    It's very touching indeed
    I LUBIT!
    U did. An amazing job Nate :)

    Take cares,

  • 10 years ago

    by Jacqueline Bautista

    This is rlly beautiful!
    it relates to how i feel:)
    feeling that way probably makes you very happy:)
    well keep writting(:
    loved it!

  • 10 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    You're a sweet guy...when it comes to love,I'll have to trust your words.they sink in.5/5